domingo, 31 de marzo de 2013

Second draft of the "Description of an event"

As every year in the university, there is a traditional event organized by second-year students from every program to receive freshmen. This is a special instance to meet, share and have fun with all of them, who are going to be our classmates and future colleagues. This huge event is well known as “mechoneo”.

This year, my second-year classmates of English program and I organized several activities for this special day starting with “Café Convers”, which is a reception where classmates can talk and eat; and different games in which freshmen have to find their respective godparents. Then, it concluded with a ride to “Jardín Botánico” where there were many fun activities.

One of the most significant and special moment of the “mechoneo” was the godparent-godchild meeting. There, all the freshmen were given a half of their portrait shots and they had to find the other half of the photograph, which was with their respective parents. Here is when we wanted to show them how important they are and that we want to be a strong support for them.

I personally think that this event was very successful and it was necessary for the union of all the English program’s students, which makes it not only a big group of colleagues, but friends for life.

sábado, 16 de marzo de 2013

Second draft of the argumentative essay



In Chile, there has always been a persistent tendency to think women are not equal to men in several aspects; therefore, most of Chilean people devalue the women’s rights. The same happens with the International Women’s Day, which is not properly celebrated and valued by the vast majority of the country.

Some people say International Women’s Day is properly celebrated, because commercial shops take advantage of this instance to put in lower prices women’s clothes, accessories, etc. And there are others who say it is properly celebrated because the government reminds us the women’s rights and that this field has to improve.

The most important and essential reason of why this day is not properly celebrated is because a great number of persons who you ask about this day, they do not even know when it is celebrated. If the government wants to make of this day a big event, they need to make sure that all of the citizens know about this international day. Moreover, this day is just other instance for shops to make big sales, so it is not anything else than a commercial concept.

All things considered, we cannot say that International Women’s Day has been celebrated in a correct way with all the value that it deserves. The national government should make a real effort and make women feel that they really deserve the principal character of the whole humanity.