Second draft of the Writing Test

Ten years ago, scientists started to do a research on a pregnant woman whose baby had been diagnosed with a certain kind of mental disease. The woman started doing a treatment in which the main factor of cure was music. During the whole pregnancy, scientists went through all the processes until they found out how music was healing the mental disorder of this little child. Finally, they discovered that the baby was born with less percentage of this disease than before just because of the effects of music, which confirms that music heals people in a certain way.

It is known that music has the power of provoking certain changes in people’s brain because it can make them feel so, through these feelings, even if it is sadness, happiness or anger, signals are being sent to their brains and this can has several effects. This can be noticed because people feel different, they experiment a new sensation that was only provide by music. But many people think that these changes are not a consequence of the music’s effects, as music can only produce changes in the moment that a song is being playing.

It is possible that music can only affect people in a temporary way, but in the case of this woman, music was the protagonist of this long and constant process she had to go through. That is to say that any factor can produce multiple consequences if it is used in a routinely way. This case is similar to the Mozart Effect, where classical music provokes changes in children before they had born.

All things considered, people can find a helpful way in music if it is to do with some mental disease because, based on evidence and studies, we all can see that music can heal people. Therefore, people should trust more in music and start to use it in other aspects of their daily lives, not only for an entertainment reason.